#1: You admire a character for trying to be funny more than for actually being interesting.
#2: You gotta keep in mind what’s interesting to you as an audience, not what got you an actual audience. They can be v. different.
#3: Trying for theme is important, but you won’t see what the story is actually about til you’re at the end of it. Now rewrite it so Greedo shoots first.
#1: You admire a character for trying to be funny more than for actually being interesting.
#2: You gotta keep in mind what’s interesting to you as an audience, not what got you an actual audience. They can be v. different.
#3: Trying for theme is important, but you won’t see what the story is actually about til you’re at the end of it. Now rewrite it so Greedo shoots first.
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